Kia Ora Rata, I like the way you used descriptive language to describe words. It reminded me of when I use descriptive words in my writing. Maybe next time you could do more slides about it or give it a title other than that it's great.
Hello Rata! My name is Laura and I am from Belfast school. I like how you used descriptive language to describe how you felt after your surgery. Next time you could say what type of surgery you had. Did it hurt at all and could you feel anything?
Kia Ora Rata,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used descriptive language to describe words.
It reminded me of when I use descriptive words in my writing.
Maybe next time you could do more slides about it or give it a title other than that it's great.
Hello Rata! My name is Laura and I am from Belfast school.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used descriptive language to describe how you felt after your surgery.
Next time you could say what type of surgery you had.
Did it hurt at all and could you feel anything?